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Draw This Again meme

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Blank meme:
Meme: Before and After by Bampire

2013:
Shadira by CrypticGrin

2014:
Shadira by CrypticGrin 
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:star::star::star::star: Overall
:star::star::star::star::star-empty: Vision
:star::star::star::star-half::star-empty: Originality
:star::star::star::star::star-half: Technique
:star::star::star::star::star: Impact

The first image, while still much better than what I could do, it's a little difficult to discern what is what, due to the fact that a lot of things are dark. But in the "after" image, you cleared it up by making her hair lighter, and everything else lighter, but still able to be told apart. In the "before" image, I feel that the neck is a bit thin, but you fixed that in the other piece. As for shading, the second image could use a little bit more of it.

Overall, both images are amazing, but my favor goes to the second image for attention to detail and beautiful anatomy.